N2Y4 Finalist Pitch Feedback (Part 1)

At N2Y4, a number of projects received an extra, $5,000 prize as part of a grant from the French American Charitable Trust (FACT). In addition to these awards, FACT has generously funded NetSquared and TechSoup Global to provide development assistance to all of the finalists from N2Y4.

Behind the scenes, we're working hard to identify and make connections to funders that might be interested in the featured projects, but before we make introductions we're asking the NetSquared community to help refine pitches and hone messages. To this end, we've asked each N2Y4 Finalist to create a 5-minute or shorter Slidecast - a self-playing Slideshare presentation - and will be posting them in batches to the NetSquared blog. Please provide feedback, advice, tips, and/or guidance in the comment field below.

First up, FrontlineSMS and Equobility: