Well-done and well-polished. The examples are simple but clear, and the statistics presented are useful without being overwhelming. Also...I love the superheroes at the end :)

If I had to add one thing, it would be an explicit "how to get involved" or "why we need your support" at the end. Funders are going to be impressed at your media coverage and history of winning competitions -- but they'll simultaneously think, "well, they'll be well-funded whether or not we give them anything." Your success will be a double-edged sword here. So you need to concretely make the case for why more funding is needed. You look very professional, but you almost look too professional -- like everything's already finished. Show the funders something unfinished -- something they can help build.

You all know I love VozMob, and this presentation captures some of the really innovative strategies for amplifying a marginalized community's voice. And without knowing what will be said alongside the slides being displayed, it's hard to get a full idea of the presentation.

But from the slides included, I think you're still missing the "how" -- how does collecting a community's voice(s) on a single website help amplify their voice, and how will that help the members of that community? I'm sure you have several answers to that, and I'm not suggesting that you don't, just that you need to make them explicit. If you do in what you say along with the slides, then no worries.

I know you also have a really compelling (to me, anyway) theory of change that is part of this, and perhaps that's what you're presenting during the "popular education" slide -- but one way or another I hope that comes across, because I think it does significantly differentiate you from many of the "cool tech donations to marginalized populations" projects -- of which, let's be honest, there are many.

The VozMob+Digital Democracy integration is really exciting and I almost think it deserves its own presentation (or more slides). Again, though, maybe you're explaining a lot more verbally that's not on the slides.

The project examples you give are great, and really speak to the depth of creativity in connecting activists with each other and with diasporic and sympathetic communities around the world.

The "problem/solution" slide seemed like it was reaching a little too far though. Civil war solved by networking? Use of child soldiers prevented through education? No doubt these are important, even critical parts of the solution -- but presenting them as linearly following from one to the next, or binary opposites that just take the flip of a switch in the form of a policy, seems to go beyond your evidence and really reaches outside of what you're trying to show with your slideshow in any case. People (and funders) familiar with these kinds of intractable problems are going to be skeptical of anyone who comes to them with the perfect solution, especially an entire list of them.

You have some brilliant solutions, and I'd focus on illustrating them, but not trying to present them as the only possible solution.